chapter 1 (the hunt)
◕ Cracking of ice as the melted droplets poured down. It was hot day for the pack of sabers, they where all resting under the great arch which was sheltering them for a generations and stood like a shield against the blazing sun, the light from the sun reflexed from the snow which made it light up and shimmer, in the pack there where three new hunters ready for there first ever as a team solo hunt to being prey back to the arch and feed the pack. they had the best prey around comparing the other packs near by. The heavy steps of the big dark brown saber marched to the hunters corner there the three new saber toothsome Nora, Rex and Cleo laid getting ready for the hunt "YOU SABERS READY?!" said the big saber "yes sir, Zane" answer Cleo in her normal soft voice, "ok then follow ME! i will lead out the arch" said Zane "here starts the bossy him again..." whispered Rex to himself, Zane gave him a serious stare, Rex hesitated. "Come on lets move guys." interrupted Nora and padded towards the outside.
Cleo and Rex finished up gathering up their prey, when Nora appeared with a bunch of rodents in his mouth, "Nora that's all?" Cleo was astonished "Why, is it not enough" he asked "Look Nora you have to catch according to the size of the pack! This can't even fill a junior" Cleo raged, Nora looked at his paws and felt as if he screwed up, "look Nora, Cleo is just saying the pack needs more food" explained Rex.
" never mind it Cleo will tell the pack he helped us" said Rex. "Fine" replied Cleo "lets go then" he gave a pause "thanks guys..." Rex gave him a nod and they all dragged the prey up up the hill, Suddenly there was a slam, Nora left the pray and went to see what had happened, he felt his paws go cold, his body freeze up on that moment to what a sight it was, the arch had fallen over.
◕ Cracking of ice as the melted droplets poured down. It was hot day for the pack of sabers, they where all resting under the great arch which was sheltering them for a generations and stood like a shield against the blazing sun, the light from the sun reflexed from the snow which made it light up and shimmer, in the pack there where three new hunters ready for there first ever as a team solo hunt to being prey back to the arch and feed the pack. they had the best prey around comparing the other packs near by. The heavy steps of the big dark brown saber marched to the hunters corner there the three new saber toothsome Nora, Rex and Cleo laid getting ready for the hunt "YOU SABERS READY?!" said the big saber "yes sir, Zane" answer Cleo in her normal soft voice, "ok then follow ME! i will lead out the arch" said Zane "here starts the bossy him again..." whispered Rex to himself, Zane gave him a serious stare, Rex hesitated. "Come on lets move guys." interrupted Nora and padded towards the outside.
cleo
rex
nora
Zane had lead them out, the arch and pointed at the hill of snow which a-parted them from the the Terra birds and the other packs near by. They had reached the top of hill, Nora stopped and gave a look back "we will be home soon..." something was telling Nora something was not right.
The Arch
they went down the hill when they all reached the bottom the all took tastes of the air check any prey near by, Rex and Cleo got a scent of deer they teamed to take it down while Nora got scent of something small and tasty. Nora went to check it out, he saw small paw steps it wasn't any cub but a rodent by the smell, he tracked it down when suddenly there was movement in the bush to his left, he walked up to it quietly and crouched on the snow, his belly touched the snow and he had a weird feeling in his paws.






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